Draft:Lu & The Bally Bunch/Transcript

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Fruit Caboose

All:Chugga, chugga, chugga, chugga. Woo-woo!, Chugga, chugga, chugga, chugga. Woo-woo!.
Shella: Hello, everyone. Today, Bally Bunch, I thought it would be fun to do some building together.
Lu: Yay!
Barnaby: Woohoo.
Biba: I love building.
Shella: Here they come. You get building, bugs. I'll be right here if you need me.
Elodie: I'm going to make a castle!
Declan: I need the blue ones to make the Teapot Cafe.
Lu: I need them to make the river.
Declan: I need the blue ones to make the Teapot Cafe.
Lu: I need them to make the river. You know, there's lots of blue blocks, actually.
Declan: So...
Lu: So maybe we can share. It is nice to share. you know?
Declan: Hmm. OK.
Elodie: C'est fini!
Shella: I love your castle, Elodie. So many colors. How's everyone else getting on?
Lu: Finished!
Biba: All Done!
Shella: Look at all this building you've done! Whoa! I'd love to live in such a wonderful place.
Elodie: I love it.....but I love the castle the most.
Shella: We all have our favourites. Now, I'm guessing all this building is hungry work. Who ready for a snack?
Lu: I am.
Biba: Me too!
Elodie: I could eat.
Shella: Well, let's visit the fruit caboose.
ALL: Yay!
Shella: Line up, bugs.
Lu: Oh, I hope there's a pear today.
Shella: All aboard.
ALL: Yep.
ALL: Chugga, chugga, chugga, chugga. FRUIT CABOOSE! Chugga, chugga, chugga, chugga. FRUIT CABOOSE!
Shella: So now, bugs, pick your fruit one at a time.
Lu: Oh, a pear.
Declan: Pear. I love pears.
Lu: Don't pick the pear.
Declan: Please, not the pear.
Barnaby: Um. apple for me.
Lu: Yes!
Declan: Yes!
Biba: Hmm. Orange? No. Pear?
Declan: No!
Biba: Banana. Um, mm...Pear.
Lu: Not the pear.
Biba: Orange.
Lu: Yes! I get the pear!
Declan: Oh, I wanted the pear. (sighs)
Elodie: Mm. Lu, smell it.
Lu: (smells) Oh!
Elodie: C'est delicieux!
Lu: Mm. Delicieux!
Declan: (eats)
Lu: Declan! You bit my pear.
(all gasps)
Declan: No, I didn't
Lu: Yes, you did. I just saw you. It's still in your mouth.
Declan: OK. I did. You said it's nice to share, and we shared the blue blocks earlier.
Lu: That's different. I asked you if you wanted to share the blocks. You just took a bite and didn't ask me.
Declan: Well, you got the only one, and that's Not fair. It was only a bite.
Biba: Stop shouting!
Shella: What's all this, bugs?
Lu: He bit my pear!
Declan: I wanted a pear and she got the only one.
Shella: Ah! You both love pears.
Lu: Yeah!
Declan: Yeah!
Shella: Sounds like you feel upset that Declan bit it without asking, Lu.
Lu: Yeah.
Declan: I just wanted to share it.
Shella: Hmm. Well, as I see it, sharing only really happens when both bugs are happy to share. What do you reckon, Declan?
Declan: Well, yeah, I guess.
Lu: I don't want to eat it now because he bit it.
Gus: I wouldn't like to eat a pear if someone else, bit it.
Declan: Me neither.
Shella: Thanks for seeing things how Lu does, Declan. So, bugs, what do you want to do now?
Declan: Because you don't want the pear any more, you can have my orange, Lu.
Lu: Thanks.
Elodie: Actually, what's happening to the pear?
Gus: Are you going to throw it out?
Declan: How about I have it?
Elodie: No way!
Lu: No! Because then you get all of it, just cos you bit it and I don't get any.
Declan: OK.
Biba: Shella, you could cut the pear up and give Lu the not-bitey bit.
Shella: There's an idea, Biba. How does that sound?
Lu: OK.
Shella: Just one sec. (humming) Now, there you go, Lu.
Lu: I have loads now. Half a pear and an orange. You can have the bitey half, Declan.
Declan (eats) Thanks, Lu.
Lu (eats)
It's nice of you to share the pear with Declan, Lu.
Declan: You have an orangey smile.
Lu: Do you want to share some? It smells delicieux.
Declan: Oh, it does. Delicieux.
Lu: You've an orangey smile, too.
(giggling)
(fades away)