Draft:Jack Lloyd

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Declined by Clarityfiend 3 years ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: possible mergeto WPDetective Lloyd DGG ( talk ) 01:23, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

Comment: Fails WP:ACTOR and WP:GNG. Passing mentions in books isn't enough. Also, IMDb says a different Jack Lloyd (Australian-born, not UK) starred in Detective Lloyd. Clarityfiend (talk) 20:24, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Not to be confused with the songwriter of the same name

Jack Lloyd was an actor in the United States. He appeared in comedy shorts. He starred in the 1932 serial film Detective Lloyd.^{[citation needed]} Different Australian actor?

He worked on various Al St. John comedy films for Jack White.^[1]

Partial filmography edit

His Jonah Day (1920) as Fisherman
The Decorator (1920) as Her Sweetheart
The Blizzard (1921) as A tenant
The Nuisance (1921) as City slicker
The Lucky Dog (1921) as Boyfriend
Move Along (1926),^[2] extant and available online
Fool's Luck (1926) as Her Father
Listen Lena (1927)
High Spots (1927)^[1]
Leave 'Em Laughing (1928) as Dentist
Detective Lloyd (1932)^{[citation needed]} different actor from Australi

References edit

^ ^a ^b Massa, Steve (April 23, 2013). "Lame Brains and Lunatics". BearManor Media – via Google Books.
^ Balducci, Anthony (July 17, 2009). Lloyd Hamilton: Poor Boy Comedian of Silent Cinema. McFarland. ISBN 9780786441594 – via Google Books.

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[var-1] Massa, Steve (April 23, 2013). "Lame Brains and Lunatics". BearManor Media – via Google Books.

[2] Balducci, Anthony (July 17, 2009). Lloyd Hamilton: Poor Boy Comedian of Silent Cinema. McFarland. ISBN 9780786441594 – via Google Books.

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