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Comment: Thanks for adding more sources! Unfortunately, as far as I can tell they don't demonstrate Lui-Fakaotimanava's notability as an individual - they're all either not independent or they only discuss him in the context of the NZ team as a whole. If you have independent sources which specifically discuss Lui-Fakaotimanava, that would be a huge help here. Turnagra (talk) 09:17, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
Eamon Holona Lui-Fakaotimanava (born 14 March 1986) is a former New Zealand Water Polo player..[1]. [2]
Eamon played for the New Zealand Men’s Water Polo team 2007 - 2015[3], and played ~60 internationals for New Zealand. He captained the team at the 2014 Commonwealth Water Polo Championships in Aberdeen[4], and was vice captain at the 2013 FINA World Water Polo Championships[5], and the 2013 FINA World League. He made his debut at the Southern Cross Cup vs the USA in 2007.
Internationally, Eamon played for the Miskolc Miskolc Vizilabda Klub in Hungary (2013/2014)[6], UZSC in the Netherlands (2017/2018), and the KFC Queensland Breakers in Australia (2009, 2010)[7]
In New Zealand, Eamon hails from the Hutt Water Polo Club in Lower Hutt, Wellington, and played for the Hutt Heat (2006 - 2016)[8], winning the National Championship in 2011. He also played for Marist Water Polo Club in Auckland (2013), winning the National Championship and being awarded National League MVP in 2013[9].
Eamon is of Niuean and Pakeha descent, with Irish and Scottish heritage, and graduated from Victoria University of Wellington[10]
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- ^ "Eamon LUI-FAKAOTIMANAVA | Profile | AQUA Official".
- ^ "Eamon Lui". 14 March 2013.
- ^ "Senior Men International Results".
- ^ "Fixtures & Results | Scottish Swimming". Archived from the original on 2016-10-13.
- ^ "Senior Men International Results".
- ^ "Hungary the dream for Kiwi water polo player". 10 October 2013.
- ^ "Water Polo: Kiwis confident of making world finals". 4 October 2023.
- ^ "Hutt Heat fire up for waterpolo finals". 31 January 2009.
- ^ https://nzwaterpolo.org.nz/media/120/nzwp-annual-report-2012-2013.pdf?swipeboxvideo=1
- ^ "Eamon Lui-Fakaotimanava | Pasifika hub".