Wikipedia:WikiProject Television/The X-Files task force/A-Class review/Milagro (The X-Files)

The following is an archived discussion of an A-Class nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in the main page's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was approved by TRLIJC19 18:14, 18 November 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Milagro (The X-Files) edit

Nominator(s): Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Leave comments here for an A-Class assessment! Thanks--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from TBrandley (talk) 17:44, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: I would suggest you gather some interest from WikiProject The X-Files and television members, by leaving notices at the project's talk pages, and leaving review requests to members to get this over one-month nomination going. In any case, here's what I found:

Where's the production code referenced?
Where's the running time referenced?
"science fiction television series" add "American" to the start
To prevent WP:OVERLINK and such, I would suggest linking "science fiction" in this case to "science fiction on television"
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
"premiered" should be "originally aired"
Only "Fox" should be linked, without "network"
"April 18, 1999 in the United States" remove United States note, as per the above
"was written by Chris Carter from a story by John Shiban and Frank Spotnitz, and was" that last "was" is repetitive, remove please, as it is already at the opening of the sentence explaining
""Monster-of-the-Week"" only link Monster-of-the-Week without the quotation marks ""
Suggest noting a bit more about "Monster-of-the-Week", such as "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching mythology of The X-Files"
Link "Nielsen household rating" to "Nielsen rating" per WP:UNDERLINK
"in its" grammar fail, replace with "upon" instead
"enjoyed" not encyclopaedia like, replace with different word
Per WP:TVPLOT, I think you could remove some unneeded details in plot section if possible
Linking problems with "Los Angeles" and "Fox", check full article please
Add alt text to images per MOS:IMAGES
"The X-Files Wiki" italics for The X-Files please

Overall; looks good, but I will take a more through look later. TBr and ley 20:45, 16 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Cool beans. I think I've fixed everything. Tell me how it looks now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:02, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support for A-Class. TBr and ley 17:44, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Support – Per the review above and having read the article. Bumping this one shortly. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 18:13, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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