Wikipedia:Featured picture candidates/Image:LMFBR schematics2.svg

Fast breeder reactor edit

Original - The fast breeder or fast breeder reactor (FBR) is a fast neutron reactor designed to breed fuel by producing more fissile material than it consumes.

Edit - To address concerns.

Reason: Clear and informative picture. The world is now facing an energy crisis and fossil fuels are becoming global problem, so I want to attract attention to a new source of energy through which we can produce more clean energy than consume.
Articles this image appears in: Fast breeder reactor
Creator: Graevemoore

Support as nominator Alokprasad84 (talk) 15:06, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, english is not my first language either, so take my corrections with a grain of salt. But more importantly the nomination text is pure soapboxing. May I suggest you rephrase so it points out why the image (as opposed to the topic) would be featureworthy, and how the image fulfills the FP criteria (and it does IMO). --Dschwen 17:38, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Diagram is pretty clear and readable. The rectangular border detracts from the image and isn't necessary, so I'd suggest removing. Also, the grey dashed line down the middle clashes with the text; consider adjusting its thickness or making it transparent under the text. Could have a little better detail in the components. Definitely should have a scale of measurement indicating something of the size of the unit. Is it as big as a house? Bigger? Smaller? Jeff Dahl (Talk • contribs) 00:19, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I would assume these reactors could be several different sizes, spanning an order of magnitude or two. Kaldari (talk) 19:59, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Jeff Dahl's concerns are good, but furthermore, I'm a little troubled by the steam and water being cut off. I assume that it goes to a turbine, much like a nuclear, coal, or gas plant. "(to turbine)" and "(from turbine)" labels would be nice.--HereToHelp ^{(talk to me)} 01:51, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I have made changes to address people's concerns. Graevemoore (talk) 20:29, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Looks good now.--HereToHelp ^{(talk to me)} 21:09, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support de Bivort 23:46, 16 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support edit Very informative image, looks nice...very detailed. I learned something today! :D. Spencer^T♦^C 03:10, 18 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Promoted Image:LMFBR schematics2.svg --NauticaShad es 14:35, 18 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]