Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of state presidents of the Indian National Congress/archive2

Nominator(s): 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 13:07, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel the list has been written with the FL criteria in mind. "All sorts of suggestions and inputs are welcome. Thank you. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 13:07, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Alavense

"a state presidents is tasked"

Fixed

"including the appointment and coordination of leaders at various levels viz" - What is that supposed to mean? I don't understand the "viz" at the end.

Fixed

"District committee, block committee and for each panchayat development block or panchayat samiti." - Is that sentence missing a verb or something?

Fixed

"As of now" reads a bit vague.

Fixed

"the INC has state and UT presidents for all states and union territory in India" - If I'm not mistaken, there are several union territories in India, so why say "union territory"?

Fixed

Conversely, the abbreviation in the second table should read "Union territory" instead of "Union Territories", as there's only one in each row.

Fixed

In the tables, the name of the incumbent should be moved to the second column, leaving the portrait for the third one.

Fixed

Could anything be said about those vacancies?

Actually their appointment date is not available at this time. Hence, I have added a note.

All the article titles read like this: "X Pradesh Congress Committee". Why then, in the tables, do we sometimes have "Andhra Pradesh" and sometimes just "Assam"?

Fixed

Thanks in advance for your responses, 25 Cents FC. Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 11:05, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Alavense, I have addressed all the issues you raised. If you have any further questions, please feel free to include them in your response. Thank you for your attention and cooperation.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:46, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, 25 Cents FC, I was away on holidays. A few more things:

"decision making body" should be "decision-making body".

Done

In addition, A state

Done

reaching out to diverse sections of society, and addressing - That comma is not needed.

Done

That last "currently" feels a bit vague. Since when?

Done

For Varsha Gaikwad, there's an image of her available in Commons, so maybe you could crop it and include it.

Done

Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 07:02, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your valuable comments, Alavense mate. I’ve addressed the points. Let me know if everything looks good.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:41, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Alavense (talk) 13:48, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"indulging in political campaigns" - not sure "indulging in" is the right term. I suggest "leading"

Done

"Also known as the leader of the state and UT party,"- write union territory in full

Done

"Pradesh Congress Committee" - is there a link for this? Or if not, can you take a few words to explain what it is?

Done

"each panchayat development block" - same comment as above

Done

"Appointed by" column should sort on surname, not forename

Could you please help me with this? Just one example, and I will take care of the rest.

As the tables are sortable, the names in the "appointed" column should be linked each time

Need help on this one too.

That's it -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:52, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi ChrisTheDude Help me with the last two options. An example will be sufficient for me to take care of the rest. Thank you.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:48, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]