His fourth album Reckless was released in 1984 with sales more then five million copies sold in the United States. - wrong "then" is used here, than is the right one. Done
The album reached sales of more than 10 million units worldwide,[1] which 3 million copies was sold in the United States. - how about, with 3 million copies sold in the United States. Done
He has been the recipient of several Grammy Awards; Reckless and "It's Only Love" was nominated for two awards at the 28th Grammy Awards. Adams won none of the awards. - I don't think its relevant to list his nominations that he lost when you start the sentence about him winning Grammy Awards. Done
Adams collaborated with Sting and Rod Stewart in 1995 and they released "All For Love" which recieved a Grammy nomination the same year. - the "Sting" linked here goes to a disam. page, you should correct that. Done
American Music Awards
Adams have won one award out of two nominations. - wrong tense of "having", should be "has" Done
MTV Music Awards
Adams has received one awards from ten nominations.[13][9] - why is "awards" plural if he only won "one" award? Done
Closing statement - the list is full of grammatical errors, style errors and referencing issues. FLC is not PR. Before bringing lists to FLC they should be ready for the odd minor tweak, not a complete overhaul. Please peer review this, have a native English speaker review it and then bring it back to FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:09, 15 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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