Oxford Metrics draft

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Hello Madam Fatal, you kindly left some clarification on a recent article of mine (Draft:Oxford Metrics) in Wikipedia:Teahouse/Questions/Archive 1189 Thank you for this. Following this I have made some edits to the article, bearing in mind the feedback from other editors. I would be very appreciative if you could take a look and offer any guidance before I re-submit for review.

Thank you for your help so far and do please let me know your thoughts. EWix76 (talk) 15:35, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi EWix76, I don't usually do reviews, but I took a quick look at Draft:Oxford Metrics and I think you still have a long way to go. The article reads like a brochure, and doesn't really indicate notability as Wikipedia defines it. You use some acronyms which aren't defined (what does "AIM listed" mean?) and the page isn't formatted like a Wikipedia article -- the "Overview" title is unneeded and the "Sales...acquisitions" sections could either be done away with entirely or at least rewritten in prose format. But as I said, I'm not a reviewer, so don't feel obligated to take my advice. Madam Fatal (talk) 20:28, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

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