User talk:Amwestph/test

• Overall, nice job!
• You should try to add citations that don't just use bare URLs, but include an APA-formatted reference
• I made a pass over the text and made some minor wording edits. Please look at 'view history', and 'compare versions' to look at the changes I made.

ShaneTMueller (talk) 18:24, 15 February 2013 (UTC)