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The Yankees are one of the greatest baseball teams in history.

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The New York Yankees have won 27 World Series championships (cite)—almost three times as many as any other team (cite)

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Joseph Robinette Biden Jr. is an American politician and the president-elect of the United States.
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Electricity is hazardous
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Some lead joints in stained glass windows melted in the heat of the fire.
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Wikipedia:No original research so then find Wikipedia:Independent sources

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