Talk:Walden–Wallkill Rail Trail/GA1

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 02:48, 7 January 2011 (UTC) No disamb links or bad links.Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

I will be reviewing your article. It clearly represents a lot of work.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "The park is expected to be built once" ->"The park is expected to be developed once"
    "Congressman Maurice Hinchey announced the procurement of $351,000 to complete the project"->"Congressman Maurice Hinchey announced the appropriation of $351,000 to complete the project"
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Do you have a source for the fact that the trial is no longer named after Jesse McHugh?
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Explain who Jesse McHugh was in the lead. It is too burried now.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    no edit wars.
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Nice photos. Thank you for contributing them.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Placing article on hold.

Changes I don't have a source that it's no longer named after Jesse McHugh, so tweaking the wording slightly. All other changes have been completed.
--Gyrobo (talk) 04:35, 7 January 2011 (UTC) Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 06:38, 7 January 2011 (UTC)Reply