Talk:Triumph of a Heart/GA1
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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 23:30, 10 January 2018 (UTC)
Initial comments: edit
- You quote ""the workings of anatomy" in the lead, so it must be cited
- Same must occur for "erratic"
- "Pitchfork" needs to be italicized
- In the block quote, I believe citation #9 should be placed at the end of the block versus where it currently is
- Not sure if "website" after "BBC Manchester" is entirely necessary
- Several critics suggest that "Triumph of a Heart" was a successful album closer; could this be mentioned in the lead too?
- Maybe including the release year for The Medúlla Videos DVD set in parentheses would be helpful to the reader
- Using "div col" in the "Track listings and formats" section awkwardly splits up the different releases, depending on the size of the page; I'd recommend changing it to "col-begin"/"col-2"/"col-end" in brackets so you can control where the splits occur – if you need an example of this, let me know
- You could include a link to the official music video for "Triumph of a Heart" under the "External links" section
- Perhaps you might want to archive any reference links right now so they are preserved in the future by using this link