Talk:Tony Bennett and Lady Gaga: Cheek to Cheek Live!/GA1

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 06:17, 29 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • "in the United States, on LG's"; 'of Nat King Cole's "Orange Colored Sky", at the': no commas necessary.
  • "in Anchorage, Alaska due": comma necessary after "Alaska".
  • 'Vogels recalled, "It was': decapitalize "It".
  • "The team then started with eight full racks of clothing, 200 to 300 dresses": 200 to 300 each, or is that a total? Needs to be clarified.
  • 'of gowns" and too': add a comma after the quote.
  • Gonna need a quote after '"distracting"' per WP:MINREF.
  • "Other videos included that for": not sure if "that" is the correct usage in the sentence. It sounds like it could be referring to lattermost the song mentioned in the previous sentence ("Bang Bang (My Baby Shot Me Down)"). I'd recast the sentence somehow; if you replace that with those, it might sound like it's referring to both songs of the preceding sentences.
  • "'I'll be tweeting live the whole show, to get my attention for a question hashtag #CheekToCheekPBS we're so excited!'": this quote basically rehashes (heh) what's been said in the preceding clause. I'd scrap it.
  • Italicize Channel Guide in the reception section (name of a magazine publication).

Nice job, and well-detailed! On hold for 14 days. 23W 06:54, 31 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, 23W! I believe everything has been addressed. Snuggums (talk / edits) 07:11, 31 January 2015 (UTC)Reply
  Like Lightning speed! ---Another Believer (Talk) 07:14, 31 January 2015 (UTC)Reply
Great work, IB and Snuggums! Congrats, ---Another Believer (Talk) 07:28, 31 January 2015 (UTC)Reply