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Swami Shivananda
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editDid You Know...
- ... that Swami Shivananda was the first president to have laid the foundation stone of the main temple of Belur Math ?
5x expanded by Soumit ban (talk). Self nom at 15:37, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
Requested move
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The result of the move request was: not moved based on discussion at Talk:Swami Bhaskarananda Saraswati which seems similar enough that it can apply here as well Dpmuk (talk) 13:43, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
Swami Shivananda → Shivananda — Swami is a Hindu honorific title. Inclusion of honorifics is discouraged through MOS:HONORIFIC and more specifically the proposed Indic namig convention (WP:NCIN). Labattblueboy (talk) 01:40, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
I commented on this at Talk:Swami Bhaskarananda Saraswati. Maybe the discussion could continue there? Devadaru (talk) 13:18, 29 November 2010 (UTC)
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Close paraphrasing
editThis article closely paraphrases at least some of its sources. For an example of close paraphrasing, consider the following text from [1]:
In 1917, Swami Premananda who used to manage the affairs of the Math at Belur fell seriously ill, and his duties came to rest on the shoulders of Swami Shivananda. And in 1922, after the passing away of Swami Brahmananda, he was made the President of the Ramakrishna Math and Mission, in which post he continued till he end of his life.
In 1924 and 1927, he went on two long tours to the South, during which he formally opened the centres at Bombay, Nagpur and Ootacamund and initiated a large number of people.
His health which was already shattered, broke down still more and beyond recovery in May, 1933, when he had an attack of apoplexy, which deprived him of the use of half of his body including speech. He passed away on February 20, 1934, leaving a memory which is like a golden dream flung suddenly from one knows not where into this harsh world of reality.
Content added to the article in January 2012 says:
In 1917 when Baburam Maharaj (Swami Premananda) fell ill and passed away, his duties of managing the affairs of the Math and Mission came to rest with Swami Shivananda. In 1922, after the passing of Swami Brahmananda, he became the second President of Ramakrishna Math and Mission....In 1924 and 1927 he went on two long tours to South and first established the Ramakrishna Math in Ootakamund and then later in Bombay and Nagpur.
There are other passages that similarly follow too closely. I do not know if other sources are also closely paraphrased.
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Please let me know at my talk page if you have questions about this. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 12:34, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
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