Talk:Scotch Run (Catawissa Creek tributary)/GA1
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Reviewer: Editorofthewiki (talk · contribs) 02:02, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello, I will be reviewing this article. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 02:02, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Some issues with this article:
- The lead is too short.
- It seems like there is another Scotch Run in Pennsylvania. This should be mentioned in the article and/or a disambiguation page. Maybe Scotch Run should be a dab.
- Does Scotch Run meet with Catawissa Creek along Nescopeck Mountain? How long is the mountain?
- "It has the potential to be affected by acid precipitation." Has it already been affected?
- What is a umho?
- "Scotch Run flows over Leck Kill soil for its entire length. However, the northern and southern edges of the watershed are on Hazleton soil." What are the characteristics of these types of soil? Is it silty, loamy, etc.?
- Population density should be in square miles and kilometers, since it is in the U.S.
- "In its upper reaches, most of Scotch Run is closed to public access." Is it private property?
- "Due to the topography of the area in the vicinity of Scotch Run, this area was not settled until some time after the first settlement in the general area." This statement is unclear.
- Carding mill is a red link and I don't know what it is.
- Is there a boundary between the lower and upper reaches?
I am placing this on hold for 7 days until the issues can be resolved. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 02:02, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
Please also address the "decimal places" issue I have raised elsewhere, and be consistent on you ENGVAR for units, e.g. metre/meter. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:07, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
- Done, I think. @Editorofthewiki: Can this be passed now? --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 19:04, 1 July 2015 (UTC)