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editHi, I've tried revising this article. I've changed the focus of the article from LCC to the subject. I've therefore mostly rewritten the introduction and cleaned up the career, publication and exhibition sections. I've also taken out the external links to LCC, as the blog is no longer hers, and the general link was never relevant to the subject.
Over half the article previously was the Criticism section, which was basically an account of a series of THE articles, using only the critical parts, and its tone made me worry it verged on being an attack article. I have therefore renamed it Controversy and rewritten it to reflect the balance of the original articles as well providing an additional Guardian reference. I have also removed several unsourced statements.
I think the result is a better article. Any suggestions would be welcome. Thank you, MaxwellDecoherence (talk) 20:23, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
- It looks a lot better balanced Cj1340 (talk) 21:05, 22 July 2012 (UTC)