Talk:Salem station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 17:01, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• Is North River (Massachusetts Bay) the North River in the station layout section? If so, it should be linked
  • Nope, different river. There's at least three North Rivers in Massachusetts - such imagination!
• "After the railroads from Boston to Lowell, Worcester, and Providence were chartered in 1830 and 1831," - Wikilink the cities not already linked
  •  Done
• "On June 16, 1846, the stockholders authorized the sale" - Whose stockholder's?
  •  Done
• " Marblehead service was halved to one daily round trip then, and cut entirely on June 14, 1959." - This needs rephrasing
  •  Done
• "Construction of $2.5 million overpass to carry Bridge Street" - Needs an "a"
  •  Done
• "over the Danvers Branch and the Topsfield Branch[39] This was" - There's a period missing in here
  •  Done

2.

• The daily parking fee doesn't seem to be cited anywhere
  •  Done
• "bridge began on December 1, 1985" - Maybe I misread the source, but I only say the month, not the day in the source
  • It's in the bolded title of the entry
• Ref 47 shouldn't have the titles in all caps
  •  Done
• "Construction on the garage and station began in June 2013." - This is supported by a reference from March of that year. Since delays are possible in construction projects, it would be best to have a source that demonstrates that the construction actually did begin in June, besides just planned to begin.
  •  Partly done Lacking any other source to support it, I've removed the line.
• Ref 2 needs an accessdate
  •  Done
• Add an edition, if known, to the House of the Seven Gables ref. The date is given as 1893, and the book was published in 1851, so we're dealing with a later edition here
  •  Done No edition info, but added orig-year parameter
• Refs 48 and 49 shouldn't have the titles in all caps
  •  Done
• Not all of the online refs have accessdate= parameters, these should be added.
  •  Done I believe I've added these for all relevant refs (recent news stories, etc). Access date isn't relevant for archived sources, dated PDFs, etc.
• Spot check of refs is clean, as is the Earwig report

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Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 23:55, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

@Hog Farm: Thanks for the review! I believe I've fixed everything. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 01:02, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

I believe that's everything. Promoting. Hog Farm (talk) 04:05, 17 April 2020 (UTC)