Talk:Phil Hughes (baseball)/GA1
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Reviewer: Bloom6132 (talk · contribs) 05:46, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
I'm going to be reviewing within the next few days. —Bloom6132 (talk) 05:46, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Some initial thoughts –
- Ref 84 should be replaced, since WordPress.com is a blog (and thus, not really a reliable source).
- I know that blogs normally are unreliable sources of information, but this one was written by Hughes himself. Shouldn't that make it an exception? Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 10:43, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
For MLB sources (MLB.com, Yankees.MLB.com, miib.com, etc.), the work should be MLB.com, while the publisher should be MLB Advanced Media (per recently-promoted baseball FL lists Tip O'Neill Award and List of Major League Baseball pitchers who have struck out three batters on nine pitches)- "…in only his second MLB start. However, injury cut short his start…" – the second "start" sounds confusing. I know you mean the start of Hughes' career, but non-baseball readers might think his no-hitter game was cut short.
- His no-hitter game was cut short. That's what I meant. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 10:43, 22 June 2013 (UTC)