Talk:Peter Nygård

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The topic of Human Trafficking

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Some comments on this section...

The first is that this isn't really a topic about Peter Nygard, it is really Nygard International that's responsible for the outsourcing of manufacturing. That's why I moved it over to Nygard International. A corporation is run by its executives, Nygard is just one of them. An example of this error is in "They sell their clothes exclusively to Peter Nygard, ...", which isn't doubtful, since Nygard is unlikely to buy that much women's clothing, but his company might.

The next point is that there's one primary reference for the entire section (WP:PRIMARYTOPIC), and one media report of the same article. So while I think it is valid to talk about the report's accusation, just because it is in that one report does not make it a verifiable fact. So statements like "The women were smuggled into Jordan..." provides a level of certainty beyond the assurance of one report.

The tone of the section also isn't "in a disinterested tone, avoiding both understatement and overstatement" as per WP:BLP, it pretty much paints him with a guilty brush right away. The size of the section is unbalanced considering the sources and the rest of the article (see WP:UNDUE.

All that said, WP:BLP says: "Remove immediately any contentious material about a living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced", so that's the right thing to do here.

Alexthepuffin (talk) 04:14, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

I disagree. In this case Peter Nygard is directly involved. If you go to the NLC report (http://www.nlcnet.org/reports?id=0035) you will see a photo of Peter Nygard with a man named Kalifa who operates the factory in Jordan. Peter Nygard may never have been to the actual factory, but there he is with the guy running it. Executives rarely actually visit sweatshops overseas. They already know the conditions are deplorable but they don't care.

Plus it should be noted that Peter Nygard is a control freak, this is a well-documented fact and he even admits on his website. He wants everyone to be up to his standards and do exactly what he tells them to do. He has a very hands on approach when dealing with his managers overseas. (Although he prefers to have them visit him, rather them him being forced to globe trot, which is understandable.)

When you consider the existing complaints by staff from Nygard Cay combined with complaints from his L.A. and New York offices it draws some pretty conclusive evidence that he treats his workers quite poorly REGARDLESS of where they are.

Please read the sources before deleting them just because you don't agree with them. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.231.80.143 (talk) 08:10, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

This is clearly an issue that is being coatracked onto the persaon when there is nothing at all to actually associate him with it, the company article is the place for this discussion. Off2riorob (talk) 10:30, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Further comment from 99.231.80.143

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(I have moved this posting from my own talk page to here, because it is clearly content related  Chzz  ►  18:32, 17 April 2010 (UTC))Reply

You say its been moved to subheading for Nygard International, but its not moved at all. Its completely deleted. Nygard international has only two lines in it:

"Nygård International Nygård apparel manufacturing company was founded in 1967 in Winnipeg, Manitoba. It is now headquartered in Toronto, Ontario. It owns the Tan Jay line.

Peter Nygård's fashion concept retail store opened in Times Square in Manhattan on Friday, November 6, 2009."

And neither of those two lines mention the NLC report of human trafficking. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.231.80.143 (talk) 07:59, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

I see a section titled "Accusations of Jordanian sweatshops" on Nygard International. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 18:54, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

The documentary

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Has anyone been able to watch this documentary or does anyone have an independent reported citation of the content in it? Off2riorob (talk) 18:41, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

I hadn't realized that the documentary wouldn't be viewable outside of Canada. I've seen it (as many people in Canada), and I'll find other references that describe the documentary. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 18:53, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, it would be good to have independant reports. Off2riorob (talk) 19:10, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
In terms of secondary references, these two specifically refer to the past documentary: http://www.tribune242.com/04132010_alnygard_news_pg1 and http://www.tribune242.com/sports/04142010_alnygard_news_pg1 . There are other forward-looking ones from around January when Nygard was trying to block the Fifth Estate production. BTW, I don't think that the documentary's limited geographic access makes it less valuable, but we do need secondary references. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 00:59, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
And I apologize for not actually putting this into the article, but wanted to vet them here first, and I'm short of time but didn't want to lose the momentum. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 01:06, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
No worries. The nassau tribune, is there nothing international? We need to scale this back, especially here I have trimmed some of the content, we need reports so that we can report the reports. The primary is an external link, but not to support content. Thanks, I have added the two citations. Off2riorob (talk) 01:08, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Well, Nassau is technically international unless you're in the Bahamas :) What's interesting is that there are many credible stories when Nygard was trying to block production, but few afterwards. That says something about the media's perspective on the topic. The one reference I did find that I cannot include is from Women's Wear Daily (WWD), but I can't see the article without a subscription. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 14:24, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Yes your correct of course, I wish I was in Nassau right now, it was real good you found those two. I was only thinking about a big publication that was all but no matter, I adapt and accept. The womans work sub is likely about the labour issues, I would like to read more about this as and when any citations arise. Off2riorob (talk) 14:48, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
WWD is actually a fashion trade publication (http://www.wwd.com), which has quite a bit about Nygard as a designer. My local library wouldn't have a subscription to it either. so it is useless. I know exactly one person with connections in the fashion industry, let me check around. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 15:09, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Cool. Off2riorob (talk) 15:14, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Relatedness of the Peter and the company

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According to the documentary, Nygard likes to mix business with pleasure -- this was a first person account. Therefore a link to the main article from the bio page should be present. Also the heading should help anyone looking for the information to find it, currently the heading does not actually describe the content but instead a show. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Philosopherkings (talkcontribs) 04:39, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Further, the edits by Off2riorob have generally attempted to distance acts personally attributed to Peter to his company because he/she has not seen the documentary. So I don't understand exactly how someone who has not seen the actual content has editing control over someone who has... —Preceding unsigned comment added by Philosopherkings (talkcontribs) 04:46, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

The documentary is a primary source and should be backed up by reliable secondary sources. See WP:PRIMARY. The heading should be neutral, which the current one is. It should not suggest guilt or innocence. This is not about editing control, but about adhering to Wikipedia's policies. Off2riorob is trying to present this article from a neutral point of view AIRcorn (talk) 07:08, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
The documentary explains how Peter treats employees. But the Jordanian sweatshop topic is that of his company's outsourcing choice (and probably his COO, not himself). I'm not sure where the other media censorship topics belong. There's also some anti-union campaigns that could go either way. Are we approaching consensus on this? --Alexthepuffin (talk) 14:33, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
We are moving along, my position is that we need to protect the living person (even if he is ****) fill in the blank yourselves. One of my issues here is that we do not attributed blame onto him for things the Nygard company is asccused of, there is I imagine a board of directors and sharholders and suchlike, as such he can not be attributed specific company issues and we need to take care of the weight as regards that, it looks about right now imo. Off2riorob (talk) 14:44, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
The Nygard International entry seems very mis-weighted on the page. There are plenty of sources providing extra information about his direct influence on the company (good and bad). Crinock (talk) 23:07, 15 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
There used to be Nygard International, and it'd be good to gather enough material for it to have its own. It also helps separate the person from the company. Alexthepuffin (talk) 03:58, 15 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hollywoods-style parties vs. Playboy mansion style parties

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Find any references to what Hollywood lifestyle means? Playboy mansion style parties is much more informative and very close to what his parties are about. Topless models... etc. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Philosopherkings (talkcontribs) 04:55, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Without a reliable reference neither should be used. AIRcorn (talk) 06:53, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
This is a subjective description, I don't think it should be used. Lots more could be written about Nygard Cay, which could help explain his lifestyle factually. --Alexthepuffin (talk) 14:35, 20 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
I think the point is kind of missing from this section, which is, what actually makes this facility objectively worthy of the entry. Taken from the Nygard International page: http://www.usbusiness-review.com/content/view/419/ - this is also a good short description - http://www.privateislandsmag.com/2008/09/peter-nygard-nygard-cay-bahamas/ - Crinock (talk) 23:07, 15 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Miscellaneous

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This reference isn't working anymore - http://www.nationalpost.com/news/story.html?id=2430270 - (but it can be found on other sites). Other references I've seen- http://www4.nygard.com/SCF/TheMan.aspx?ID=684&Folder_id=14&Child_id=16 - http://www.bullz-eye.com/interviews/2009/peter_nygard.htm - http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1G1-53709680.html - http://www.timessquaregossip.com/2009/11/peter-nygard-opens-flagship-nyc-store.html Crinock (talk) 23:07, 15 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

I will have a look at this tomorrow, at first glance non eof those cites looks llike a good source for such a commnent, perhaps his company bio link would be but I cant find the content there. I found it but the link is blacklisted...mmm... I see there is a legal dispute over this issue, I wll look more tomorrow. I am considering removing the claim as uncited and for further discussion....yes I will, please discuss here, if a reliable comment can be presented here that is perhaps up to date as well. Off2riorob (talk) 23:19, 15 June 2010 (UTC).Reply

Employee allegations of Abuse

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This would be a more accurate heading for the section about employee mistreatment. The Fifth Estate/CBC is just one news agency that has mentioned employee mistreatment. Peter Nygard has been in business for over 43 years now and there are numerous other allegations against him dating back to the 1980s and 1970s, most of which have been settled out of court. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.231.80.143 (talk) 14:44, 22 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

We are directed to use neutral header title, please stop editing the article, get a blog and you can add whatever you want and defend yourself from Nygards lawyers. Off2riorob (talk) 14:50, 22 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Awards section

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I have some concerns with the awards section that's been put in and out a few times.

First, the section is self-serving. It doesn't present a balanced view of Nygard, particularly when the controversy section is at the tail end. Next, there is just one citation for the entire section, and the article is too glowing to be credible. We can't rely alone on bahamasb2b. Most importantly, as far as I can tell, the reference only talks about one award specifically, the North American Yachting Champion.

This section seems to be an identical copy of what's up at http://corporate.nygard.com/SCF/TheMan.aspx?ID=684&Folder_id=14&Child_id=16 . This smells like self-serving promotion.

Alexthepuffin (talk) 20:59, 29 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

I agree, the article is not for promotional porposes and the table was excessive. Sometimes less is more.Off2riorob (talk) 21:05, 29 June 2010 (UTC)Reply


Here we go again...

I don't think Nygard's awards deserve their own section.

First, they aren't significant on their own. All three are from the University of North Dakota, and I don't think anyone outside of UND recognizes these.

Next, the references are from the organizations that granted the awards. References should be from third parties.

I'm pretty sure the Midiminimaxi one is a direct copy of their press release... it is easy to tell what gets published by Nygard because they all contain the date in the format of "SEP11-01".

I'll edit this to remove the section, and mention the awards in the Early life section.

I moved the last line from Early life to the Nygard international section. I think it makes more sense there. Crinock (talk) 20:39, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Alexthepuffin (talk) 16:32, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

I agree, users adding this fluffy stuff need to be careful as not to make the article promotional. Off2riorob (talk) 16:50, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Human aquarium?

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What is a human aquarium? Does Nygard keep people in water tanks on his property? Unless we can wikilink something it seems weird to keep this. AIRcorn (talk) 23:49, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Agreed and tweaked. Off2riorob (talk) 23:59, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
Haha! Crinock (talk) 20:39, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Nygard International

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This section still reads kind of clunky. I replaced "It owns the Tan Jay line." with the 'seven products' line. I think this is more complete, but still not polished.

The overall article is unbalanced in how everything is written between sections. Crinock (talk) 20:40, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Promotional? It's not promotional to say they own 7 lines and list 3. The Nygard International line doesn't make sense in the Early Life section. Okay, it could probably go without the retail stores line. That didn't belong, but the other edits were sound. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Crinock (talkcontribs) 20:45, 14 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
A reason this section is clumsy is that the material was moved here when Nygard International got deleted (which I think was a mistake). This article gets a lot of edits that make Nygard look either like a god or a villain. Off2riorob might have been a bit quick in reverting your change. Alexthepuffin (talk) 04:04, 15 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

They were uncited if I remember and without any context, what is notable about it? and were is it cited to? This article is also about the man, his life story, the business article was already deleted as not notable and promotional. I don't want this article going the same way, sometimes less is more and independently cited, we already have a lot of primary content and fluffy promotional citations. Off2riorob (talk) 08:06, 15 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Alright, I've moved the Nygard International line to the appropriate section and simply removed the Tan Jay sentence. I agree, per the rules of wikipedia, we have to strike the right chord of balance to keep an article Encylopedic (ie., not a god or villain). My point was the clothing lines was the wiki-argument of what is 'common knowledge'--I had placed their three most common lines. The Tan Jay line was uncited, and I find it hard to believe that this difference is considered promotional. But, all the same, I left it out this time. My point with how the article was written was earlier meant to point out the stylistic differences between the positive, neutral and negative sections. It looks like a ton of sentances thrown together vs. a cohesively written piece. Crinock (talk) 17:08, 4 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lawsuits

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User User:Candor777 have twice deleted lawsuits that do not show Peter Nygard in good light. Leaving only s section, where Nygard is a plaintiff. This kind of behaviour is biased and looks like that this user is Nygards employee. Fact is that Nygard have been sued multiple times in five decades and charges have been filed and accusations have been settled without trials. As Nygard is very known person in Canada and Bahamas, these kinds of facts should be published as they have been with Bill Cosby, Harvey Weinstein and others. Mghtydux (talk) 12:02, 13 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

User User:Candor777 keeps deleting undisputed facts. Should the article be locked? Mghtydux (talk) 15:32, 14 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

  3O Response: WP:WELLKNOWN says that noteworthy, relevant and well-documented allegations (i.e.: reported by multiple reliable sources) belong in the article. The core of Wikipedia's biographies of living persons (BLP) policy is to "do no harm" but if allegations have already been widely reported then we're just summarizing what's already out there like any other aspect of an article.

Having said that, each of the points in the Lawsuits section needs to have an inline citation – and anything which does not should be immediately removed. This is not a guideline that can be taken care of in time, this is a policy which must be followed immediately. (Particularly with a subject this litigious!) Thus, I feel that User:Candor777 was justified in immediately removing the material without discussion.

I read through the first Forbes reference, formatted it as an inline citation, and paraphrased the associated block quotes to avoid copyvio. It would be good to have additional citations rather than relying on a single source for all of that. If you can cite some additional sources, you would have a much stronger case for contesting any further removal of the material. – Reidgreg (talk) 17:55, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Deletions by an IP editor

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I have repeatedly restored substantial deletions to this page by an IP editor, who is new and is only editing this page. In the most recent edit summary I have invited them here to discuss their deletions. Jusdafax (talk) 02:14, 23 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

This article should be locked for a while as lots of lines are deleted by someone close to Nygard.109.240.187.211 (talk) 20:47, 12 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

Appears to need a complete rewrite

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I don't have time to review this article at the level it needs, but there appear to be blatant BLP problems here. I've asked for help at Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard#Peter_Nygård. --Hipal/Ronz (talk) 17:09, 21 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Personally I feel the same way. Though I feel the section on his feud with Louis Bacon needs to be kept in as that was precursor to his arrest.(talk)