Talk:Not My Baby/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Very quickly that we meet again, nice looking article on first glance and I'll review to find any issues soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Remove wikilink on Freedo in the infobox under producer per WP:OVERLINK
• "is a song recorded by Romanian" → "is a song by Romanian"
• "issued as a" → "released for digital download as a"
• "Junior Oliver Frid and" → "Junior Oliver Frid, and"
• "whilst the latter was credited" → "while the latter received credit"
• "under his stage name Freedo" → "under his stage name of Freedo"
• "Reviewers noted "Not My Baby" to be a" → "The song was noted as being a"
• "song, as well as a" → "track, as well as a"
• "of the singer's Spanish" → "of Inna's Spanish"
• "Spanish sixth studio album," → "Spanish studio album" since we don't need full context in the lead and also remove the year from the brackets
• "Inna had already retransitioned" → "The singer had already retransitioned"
• "with "Bebe" that same year" → "prior to the song with "Bebe" in 2019"
• "The lyrics of "Not My Baby" delve" → "The lyrics of the former delve"
• Target Music critics to Music journalism as the earlier target should be removed
• "lyric video for the track" → "lyric video for the song"
• "uploaded to her" → "uploaded to the singer's"
• "on 2 April" → "on 2 April 2020"
• "released on 24 April" → "released on 24 April of that year"
• "seeing Inna with a snake" → "including Inna with a snake"
• "reviewer further pointed out similarities to the" → "reviewer further pointed out similarities between the visual and the"
• "Commercially, "Not My Baby" peaked" → "Commercially, the song peaked"
• Mention that the chart is Romania
• "in May" → "in May 2020"

Background and composition

• "produced the song under his stage name Freedo" → "solely produced the song under his stage name of Freedo"
• "released "Not My Baby" as" → "released "Not My Baby" for digital download as"
• Wikilink English language to itself
• "from her Spanish" → "from the Spanish"
• "her sixth studio album," → "her sixth studio album" since it's not the lead
• "Lyrically, it touches on" → "Lyrically, the song touches on"
• "relationship in which" → "relationship, in which"
• "was attractive yet selfish" → "was attractive but selfish"
• We don't target to hashtags on pages so target verses to Verse (music) instead
• Mention how many verses there is, maybe?

There is sadly no source that provides this information. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:48, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

• Target synthesized to Synthesizer

Critical reception

• Mention the chart position in here and retitle the section to Reception
• "Upon release, "Not My Baby" was received with positive reviews by music critics." → ""Not My Baby" was met with universal acclaim from music critics."
• "best releases in recent memory" → "best releases in recent memory, by April 2020" or something similar to specify "recent" timescale
• "noting its high" → "noting the high"
• Remove wikilink on remix
• "the latter pointed" → "the latter reviewer pointed"
• "that—while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases—the" → "that while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases, the"
• "jokingly stating that it" → "jokingly stating that the song"
• "called the song "perfect [...] for driving, for " → "called the former "perfect" for driving, "for"
• "which—according to the reviewer—gave "Not My Baby" its" → "which he claimed gave the song its"
• "He also concluded that the track" → "Krusch concluded that the song"
• Mention the chart position at the end of this section, but don't start a new para as it's only one sentence

Music video

• Img needs alt text
• "from the track's music video" → "from the music video"
• Add fullstop to end the img's text
• Wikilink lyric video to itself
• "created by Mihai Sighinaș was uploaded" → "was created by Mihai Sighinaș and uploaded"
• "depicts the singer" → "depicts the latter"
• "and a snake while being" → "and a snake, while being"
• "video directed by Bogdan Păun was eventually" → "video, directed by Bogdan Păun, was ultimately"
• "It commences with Inna" → "The visual commences with Inna"
• "as she sports a" → "while she sports a"
• "As the music video ends" → "As the video ends"
• "leopard-print bra, and a" → "leopard-print bra and a"
• "swimsuit alongside knee-high" → "swimsuit, alongside knee-high"
• "Currinn of CelebMix called Inna" → "Currinn called Inna" since you have already introduced this reviewer
• "in the music video" → "within the music video"
• "for leaving a" → "of leaving a"

Track listing

• Good

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Target Digital download to Music download
• Target Global to Global Records

References

• Make sure all are archived using the tool
• Copyvio score looks good
• Remove wikilink on YouTube for ref 3
• Should be spelt as YouTube on ref 10
• Ref 11 is missing the publisher

Final comments and verdict

• Quite a thorough article,  On hold for now despite the good work! --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:03, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. I have solved all your comments except for that one comment. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: ✓ Pass, as one brief lack of an inclusion isn't too high of importance. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:18, 10 May 2020 (UTC)