Talk:Nayak: The Real Hero/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:00, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Non-free use rationale looks good.
• Add a serial comma after Paresh Rawal.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "between a police" → "between the police"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "100 location" → "100 locations"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "some of whom applauding" → "some of whom applauded"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• Plot is 688 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
• "Because of his action" → "Because of his actions"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "redirects the question talking" → "redirects the question by talking"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "how difficult his occupation" - reword.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "for a day and experience" → "for a day to experience"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Assited by Bansal" → "Assisted by Bansal"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Chauhan sends assassins after him although they only destroy his house" → "Chauhan sends assassins after him, who only destroy his house"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "it will makes" → "it will make"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "In the final attempt" → "In a final attempt"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "few men was planning" → "few men are planning"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "blaming the him" → "blaming him"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Shivaji takes up a gun, but pointing it to his arm, shoots himself, and then hands over the gun to Chauhan." - clarify. Does Shivaji shoot himself in the arm on purpose or by accident? Does he just simply hand the gun to Chauhan after doing so?

Done. Shivaji does it on purpose. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "with the state develops" → "with the state developing"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Production and soundtrack

• Remove the comma after "its subject".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "interview to Filmfare" → "interview with Filmfare"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "was originally to be" → "was originally going to be"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• didn't match mine ..." → didn't match mine".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Next actor suggested" → "The next actor suggested"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Shah Rukh Khan, however" → "Shah Rukh Khan. However"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "he initially reluctant" → "he was initially reluctant"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "physical trainings" → "physical training"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "part as Manjari" → "part of Manjari"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "portray the role in her own way and not copying Koirala had done" → "portray the role in her own way, not copying what Koirala had done"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "The principal photography" → "Principal photography"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "states Maharashtra" → "states of Maharashtra"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "After the filming ended" → "After filming ended"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "who bought the rights" → "which bought the rights"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• was "a quite a letdown" → was "quite a letdown"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Release and reception

• "After scheduled for release" → "Originally scheduled for release"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "the film was opened in 280 screens" → "the film opened on 280 screens"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Rename #Critical reception to #Reception.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Then make a subsection titled #Critical response.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Finally, make #Accolades a subsection as well.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

References and external links

• Sources are archived.
• Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it has 0 reviews?

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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