Talk:My World (Justin Bieber EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash ^{talk} 15:11, 20 December 2009 (UTC)

Hi; as requested, I'll be reviewing this article. I'm not familiar (really, at all) with music-related articles, but from what I can see, this is in well-off shape. I only have a few concerns:

• I'm noticing a lot of bare URLs, which are a no-no. Please fix all of them so that they use Template:Cite web or Template:Cite news.
• Wikilink to YouTube in "Background."
• In "Background," is "IThink" how it's misspelled in the ref? If so, please add {{sic}} after it.
• In "Reception," "According to the music review aggregator Metacritic, the album had mostly favorable reviews, it has received an average score of 65 out of 100 points." -> Change to "[...]mostly favorable reviews, with an average score[...]"
• Also in "Reception," for the quote from Rolling Stone, please change "But who could deny "First Dance," where[...]" to "[...]deny 'First Dance,' where[...]" so there's no quotes within quotes.
• The track listing shows "Part I," but what about "Part II"? Is that info known/available?

That's all. Take care of the above and I'll be happy to pass the article. Cheers, The Flash ^{talk} 15:11, 20 December 2009 (UTC)

• Also note that footnotes should be placed after a full stop/comma, not before. Theleftorium 15:23, 20 December 2009 (UTC)

Alright, now that all of the ref issues and other problems have been taken care of, I've gone ahead and passed this as GA. Nice work. The Flash ^{talk} 17:01, 27 December 2009 (UTC)