Talk:Millennium season 3/GA1
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:05, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Picture, maybe? Not needed, but it would look nice. :)
- Infobox: DVD release?
- Intro: "...concluding" -> "and concluded"
- Intro: "organisation" -> "organization" just to Americanize it
- Intro: "but after the Group unleashes a virus that resulted in the death of Black's wife, he leaves." Should this be in past or present tense? Didn't the virus get released at the end of season two?
- Intro: emdash after "Johannessen"
- Left as is; that last bit about writing is intended to be part of the same aside, and wouldn't work if it's not kept with the names. It's "two new producers (X and Y, who wrote too)" rather than "two new producers who also wrote (X and Y)", which a second dash would essentially make it. I'm confusing myself here. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
- Intro: "generally positive reviews from critics" I thought this season was pretty trashed by people, or is that just the fan opinion?
- Production: "they wanted" Maybe "the writers wanted"
- Production: I think "with" should be added to the end of the last sentence of the first paragraphs
- Production: I would add a citation after every direct quote.
- Out of curiosity, are there any ratings numbers?
That's all I have. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:50, 3 November 2012 (UTC)