Talk:Kamlesh Kumari Yadav

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Latest comment: 13 years ago by 128.192.189.146 in topic Non-NPOV

npov worries

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Assuming that this page is, in fact, about a notable person (I haven't heard of her but I obviously am not the only one to decide notability), this page needs to be rewritten so that it reads less like an obituary written by a family member in praise of a loved one and more like an encyclopedia article.

I sound rather cold writing that. I don't mean to insult this person's memory, but that's my opinion on this issue. Conor H. 04:10, 5 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

I have now rewritten it .Shyamsunder 18:12, 5 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Non-NPOV

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Someone claims to have rewritten this four years ago but it still is full of loaded language and unprofessional writing. Also, can anyone add details explaining why the family wishes to return the medal? --128.192.189.146 (talk) 04:20, 13 December 2010 (UTC)Reply