Talk:Just Dance (song)/GA1

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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Unionhawk in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Hello, I am Unionhawk. I will be reviewing this article. This is my first time with a GA review, so, if I make a mistake, accept apologies in advance. Anyway, let's get on this.

Criteria

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


Fix the lead up, and I think you have it.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    Well done.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    The lead needs more in-line citations. Everywhere else is great.
    C. No original research:  
    The lead appears to have some OR... maybe
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
    It is stable, but I'm thinking once protection expires, it will become unstable, and subsequently reprotected.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Like I said, there are issues with the lead, but not much more. You have 7 days. If you wish that I re-review before that 7 day period, leave me a message on my talk page.
I'm not entirely sure what appears as original research in the lead, as most of it is repeated in the main body of the article. I guess I must be missing it, so could you point it out instead? I have, however done some general copy editing. -- A talk/contribs 04:17, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
I've taken a quick look at the article, to me it looks good. Reference #55 needs to be properly formatted, though. CarpetCrawlermessage me 04:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

re: "Just Dance" review

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Apparently, I was unclear about the lead. I'm saying that 2 in-line citations isn't enough for how long the lead is.--Unionhawk Talk 17:43, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Well... there's four in-line citations now. Nothing else is worth citing as it's repeated in the article and likely won't be challenged information. -- A talk/contribs 19:04, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
Fair enough. I did not know about that guideline before. If you are ready, let me know.--Unionhawk Talk 19:52, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
Well, as I've just rid (definate) original research from lead I think we're ready. Thanks to fellow users for pointing out errors. -- A talk/contribs 21:09, 3 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
All right. I'll take a good look.--Unionhawk Talk 00:52, 4 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Post On-Hold Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


After about 2 days of tweaks, and me learning one guideline, here's my review:

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
    Then again, what article isn't slightly unstable when unprotected?
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Good job on the GA. Congratulations.