Talk:Jacques de Savoie, Duke of Nemours

Robert not son of Jacques

Geni discussion at the link https://www.geni.com/discussions/167819 says it all. See also what Canadian radio personality Maureen Holloway has to say at the link https://www.chfi.com/2020/01/31/we-can-never-be-royals/. The two generations of de la Voye descendants figuring in the article's descendance tree have accordingly been removed.Cblambert (talk) 22:45, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Coverage and accuracy

Hi @Vami IV: I see you have gone through roughly 6 or so articles I've written, downgrading them from b class to c class due to a failure to meet criterion 2 "coverage and accuracy". Could you elaborate in what regard these articles have failed in that respect?

Sovietblobfish (talk) 06:51, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

Sure thing. For your articles, I failed them on B3 for having super-sized leads and comparatively small prose sections, which is also why I failed them on B2. If you shrank the leads down and beefed up or combined prose sections to put some meat on the very rich skeletons you've put together, you'll have several B-class and no doubt GAN-worthy articles. Godspeed. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 01:02, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your reply. I had thought for an article like this with a body that's around 5x the lead length I could get away with a lead like this. Sovietblobfish (talk) 06:56, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

No problem. As a rule, leads should not exceed four paragraphs except for extraordinary circumstances. –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 08:37, 1 March 2023 (UTC)