Talk:Hurricanes Abby and Celeste/GA1
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Latest comment: 13 years ago by Thegreatdr in topic GA Review
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I'll review this article. This will be all about prose issues. I was nice and took care of the various referencing issues.
- There is an error in the lead. Tropical depressions do not skip the tropical storm stage...they just quickly move through it. I'll look over the article more carefully for more issues.
- Dramatically weakened (in the 5th sentence of the lead) is not a phrase used in an encyclopedia. Reword it.
- Combine the lead into one paragraph. There's no point in having one sentence dangle at the end, all by itself.
- Add wikilinks for the first occurrence of Caribbean Sea, weather station, maximum sustained wind, Guatemala, and Mexico.
You have until midday on February 7 to address these issues, or the article will be failed. Reviewer: Thegreatdr (talk) 15:19, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
- Finished. Anything else? Otherwise, thank you for the review!--12george1 (talk) 18:51, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
- Yep, that's it. I'm passing the article. Look through my edits reference-wise to see what I did, because other reviewers may not help you out with the referencing. The AP is frequently the author of newspaper articles. If it starts with AP in parenthesis, they're the author. Thegreatdr (talk) 19:46, 31 January 2011 (UTC)