GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)

This is a nice piece of work, but it still has some shortcomings with respect to the good article criteria.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. :: Spelling and grammer errors in the following section: Lead; Organization; , and red link problems throughout the article. Some of the layout is overlapping with the "edit" fuctions.
    Fixed all of these issues. —Ed!(talk) 22:25, 23 September 2009 (UTC)Reply
  3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  5. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  6. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  7. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  8. :: The following images: 150px and 150px don't have the permissions section filled in correctly. Without the permissions, these images could face deletion.
    I think I have added the proper tags for the images now. —Ed!(talk) 22:25, 23 September 2009 (UTC)Reply
  9. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Good luck improving the article — Pr3st0n (talk) 23:29, 22 September 2009 (UTC)Reply
    I have responded to all of your concerns. Thank you for your review! —Ed!(talk) 22:25, 23 September 2009 (UTC)Reply