Talk:Briggsdale (Columbus, Ohio)

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Latest comment: 9 years ago by 2602:304:CDD9:9090:4598:1F6E:41C:DD9A

Peer Review Comments

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-Good information on the history. It's very detailed.
-The locations of the neighborhood might fit better under a Geography section.
-In the history section, not sure if I understand when you say "16 years his junior."
-Under the Briggsdale Methodist Church, cite the references for all of the dates you researched.
-What is the significance of the Briggsdale School?

Users: Kristiana Burgi and Andrew Love — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:304:CDD9:9090:4598:1F6E:41C:DD9A (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2014 (UTC)Reply


Instructor Comments No. 1

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  • Good Start
  • I agree with Lisa, too much commentary on Family, but some of the information is useful.
  • It is never mentioned that Briggsdale was named by Briggs - need to mention that.
  • What is the Geography of Briggsdale? Boundaries? What neighborhoods are nearby?
  • On Geography: I believe there is a more formalized historical boundary, but are there nearby businesses/churches with Briggsdale in the title? This would suggest larger commonly interpreted boundaries.
  • Is there any signage?
  • WorldCat@OSU Lists several City Directories that have various names in them of residents and businesses. May want to look at these for some more information.
  • Briggsdale Apartments info is useful, but it needs to be under a residential subhead.
  • Was there a Briggsdale Railroad Station on the Columbus and Xenia railroad?

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:42, 18 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

Instructor Comments No. 2

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Well-written

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  • Lead Section Needs Work
  • Haven't updated it with current feedback
  • Add Geography Section

Verifiable with no original research

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  • Good work here

Broad in its coverage

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  • Well done.

Neutral

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  • Be careful here, Example: Joseph M. Briggs was one of the most prominent and influential citizens of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio. It should read: Joseph M. Briggs was a prominent and influential citizen of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio By doing this you remove the opinion from it (passive vs. active voice).

Stable

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  • No comments yet.

Illustrated

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  • No Images, and it needs them.
  • Also, see if you can add an info box.