Talk:Breathing (Jason Derulo song)/GA1
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
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Infobox edit
- Provide an ALT text for the cover. Done
Lead edit
- was well received → garnered positive reviews Done
Background and release edit
- You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose. Done
- Link synth Done
- and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing" Done
Composition edit
- According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove. Done
- and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample. Done
- As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics". Done
Critical reception edit
- This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol. Done
Chart performance edit
- eventually certified → Remove "eventually" Done
Music video edit
- No issues.
Live performances and cover versions edit
- No issues.
Track listing edit
- I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available. Done
Credits and personnel edit
- No issues
Charts and certifications edit
- The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table. Done
Release history edit
- I did a slight c/e of the tables.
- Could you add a Label column too. Done
References edit
- Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46) Done
Summary edit
Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold
- Passing, well done :) Aaron • You Da One 13:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)