Talk:Battles of Latrun (1948)/GA1

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Latest comment: 13 years ago by Pyrotec in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Pyrotec (talk) 21:29, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

I will review. Pyrotec (talk) 21:29, 13 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments edit

  • I've now read through the article fairly quickly. My first thoughts are: on the positive side it is a comprehensive and apparently well referenced article. On the "down side", it does not read all that well: the grammar needs improving in order to improve the readability (horrible word). I would make similar comments about the section and subsection titles - they appear to be accurate translations, but they are not very good English titles. I also suspect that the article is suffering from some WP:Overlinking, but I've not looked in detail.
  • I will now start to review the article section by section, but leaving the WP:Lead until last. At this point I will be concentrating on "problems", which I suspect will be mostly grammar. This could take a week or so for a long article such as this. I may fix some simple problems myself, in which case they may not be mentioned in this review. Pyrotec (talk) 20:14, 15 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
Most of the problems that I found were due to broken web links, formating of citations and "confusion" between citations and Notes. I've fixed most of them, so I won't bother to list them on this review template. Pyrotec (talk) 19:04, 4 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall summary edit

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    Well referenced.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    Well referenced.
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    Well illustrated.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
    Well illustrated.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

I'm awarding this article GA status. Pyrotec (talk) 07:47, 7 August 2010 (UTC)Reply