Talk:Assassination of Talaat Pasha/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Guettarda (talk · contribs) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC) This is a fascinating read, and something a knew nothing about. Guettarda (talk) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

This is excellent. I have very little to add.

Talat Pasha's exile in Berlin

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Other testimony on the genocide

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  • Is Mr. Terzibashian's first name known?
    • No, I checked the original trial transcript and it's not stated. Same with the prosecutor, Gollnick, whose first name is not stated in any source.
  • The following section begins with "His wife Christine..." A new section should be more "stand alone".
    • Reworded, thank you!

General

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  • I'm curious about the choice to refer to Adolf von Gordon as "Gordon" rather than "von Gordon"
  • Tessa Hofmann is linked twice in the body of the article, as is Carolyn Dean.
    • I feel like these mentions are too sparse and far apart so that the reader has likely forgotten who they were before getting to the second mention. (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Guettarda (talk) 23:13, 24 April 2021 (UTC)Reply