Talk:2016 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 14:02, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this dreckly. Harrias ^talk 14:02, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

• Consider adding a WP:Short description

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "It was Hull's their first game at Wembley for since losing the.." Ummm...

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "..marked their return to the Premier League for the first time since their relegation in the 2014–15 season." I can't see anything about when they last played in the Premier League in the body?

  Added. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ref #1 doesn't include information about automatic promotion places.

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• ".., with the south coast club losing.." Avoid noun plus -ing.

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "A Forestieri shot two minutes later went wide before Hernández goes through on goal, one-on-one with Westwood, who made an excellent save to deny the opening goal." An off shift to present tense in the middle. Change "goes" to "went".

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• ".., with Atdhe Nuhiu replacing.." Avoid noun plus -ing.

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "A minute later Hernández's shot is blocked.." Another foray into the present tense: Change "is" to "was".

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "..with goalscorer Diamé coming off.." Avoid noun plus -ing.

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• There are arguably quite a few false titles; "by Sheffield Wednesday goalkeeper Keiren Westwood", "which former Leicester City player Steve Claridge", "by Hull goalkeeper Jakupović", "with midfielder Sam Clucas", "with goalscorer Diamé". This is such a common construction in sports journalism that I'm not too worried about it at GA, but I wouldn't be keen if this went onto an FA.

  Done. These will all be at FA one day!! The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• "..between the two teams on the dayH.." Not sure what that "H" is doing there!

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Maybe clarify that Wednesday were eliminated in the play-off semi-finals in 2017.

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• What makes Bleacher Report reliable?

  I think if you look at the accolades the website has received, you'll have little doubt it's reliable!! The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ref #17 "Hull City tickets for Wembley play-off final going on general sale" is dead.

  Removed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Refs #20 through #24 (live reporting) need publication dates. (28 May 2016).

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

• Per WP:NAVBOX, {{2015–16 in English football}} should either link to this article, or not be included.

  Removed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

Overall, this is in good shape for GA; mostly just minor copy-edit work to do. Nice work. Harrias ^talk 11:22, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

Harrias cheers, all addressed and/or responded to above. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)