Talk:2012 Football League Two play-off final/GA1
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Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:41, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Going to review this for the GAN March 2021 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:41, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead edit
- "The top three teams of the 2011–12 Football League Two season gained automatic promotion to League One, while the teams placed from fourth to seventh" - repetition of "teams"
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Route to the final edit
- "Cheltenham Town finished the regular 2011–12 season in sixth place in Football League Two, the fourth tier of the English football league system, one place" - repetition of "place"
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- "Despite chances for Southend," - might be better to clarify that Southend had chances to score
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- "Taiwo Atieno then pulled one back for Torquay" - think this could be rephrased a little differently
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Summary edit
- "before Leitch-Smith struck an effort wide." - not sure what this means
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- "who beat a defender by flicking the ball up" - which defender was that?
- Source doesn't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- "A mistake from Dugdale sae Mohamed run through on goal" - spelling error
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- Wikilink substitution to the relevant article on the first mention only
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Post-match edit
- "Cheltenham finished in fifth place in League One" - shouldn't that be League Two?
- Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Will be putting the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:49, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done I think, bar the one which had no additional information in the source. Let me know if there's anything else and thanks for the review! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 19:06, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done I think, bar the one which had no additional information in the source. Let me know if there's anything else and thanks for the review! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)