Talk:2000 Fort Worth tornado outbreak/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 04:13, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:13, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

• I don't think there's a need to mention the state name after the city name, since all the cities mentioned are within the state of Texas.
• "On the afternoon of March 28" I think you can change to "Later that day", etc.

Mostly tiny issues. It should pass easily.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:03, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I've made adjustments accordingly. TheAustinMan^{(Talk·Works)} 00:44, 28 March 2017 (UTC)