Talk:V Pappas

(Redirected from Draft talk:V Pappas)
Latest comment: 5 days ago by Inkian Jason in topic Relationship status

Tags

edit

@CFA: Thank you for reviewing this draft and for taking it live. I have submitted a request for a redirect to be created for Vanessa Pappas, in order to address the orphan tag. If you have any specific requests or suggestions for removing the "resume" tag, I'm all ears as I would like to see the banner removed ultimately.

Thanks again for your help. Inkian Jason (talk) 22:38, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

"@Inkian Jason: I've accepted your redirect request. Regarding the resume tag, a lot of the article is overly descriptive and sometimes promotional. Lines like "Under their leadership, TikTok saw significant growth; in September 2021, Pappas announced that TikTok had surpassed 1 billion active users, becoming the fastest social media platform to reach this milestone." and "their division has been credited for popularizing the term "creator" and making the site a destination for both influencers and advertisers." are not necessary in a Wikipedia article and are exactly the type of thing you'd expect to see in a resume "showcasing" their experience. The whole article could use some reworking to remove these issues. Let me know if you have any other questions. C F A 💬 22:49, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@CFA: Thank you for accepting the redirect request and for the additional feedback. Since I have a conflict of interest, I will submit an edit request to remove the two pieces of text you've flagged. I invite you to review the request if you're interested. Thanks again! Inkian Jason (talk) 23:54, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
I forgot to mention, I have also submitted requests to have V Pappas added to the links that appear in the See also section, in an attempt to address the orphan tag even though there's already a link at 50 Most Influential (Bloomberg ranking). Thank you! Inkian Jason (talk) 00:05, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Request to remove text

edit

Based on the above feedback, I am submitting a request to remove two pieces of text from the article as part of an effort to address the resume tag. Please remove the following from the Career section:

  • their division has been credited for popularizing the term "creator" and making the site a destination for both influencers and advertisers
  • Under their leadership, TikTok saw significant growth; in September 2021, Pappas announced that TikTok had surpassed 1 billion active users, becoming the fastest social media platform to reach this milestone.

Again, I'm working to address a tag that was added when the Articles for Creation submission was taken live. Thanks for helping here, as I try to avoid editing the main space directly. Inkian Jason (talk) 23:54, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Done Rusalkii (talk) 03:11, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Rusalkii Thanks for reviewing this request and updating the article. If you or User:CFA can identify any other ways to address the resume tag, I am all ears. Thanks again! Inkian Jason (talk) 14:57, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Relationship status

edit

Hello again! I have another suggestion for this article, focused on the subject's relationship status. Currently, the article says: "Pappas is pansexual and has two children."

I propose replacing this with: "Pappas is pansexual and married with two children." The source already used as an inline citation confirms that they are married. This source also confirms their relationship status.

@CFA and Rusalkii: Might either of you be willing to update the article appropriately? Also, I see the "résumé" tag remains on the article, if either of you are comfortable removing the tag or identifying any content that needs to be addressed. Thank you! Inkian Jason (talk) 18:03, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Done Encoded  Talk 💬 09:29, 26 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for reviewing this request, Inkian Jason (talk) 15:54, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply