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Latest comment: 8 years ago by Anne Delong in topic Neutral point of view?
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Neutral point of view?
editSome parts of this article seem to be an advertisement, particularly the section about "premium alternative" and "chauffeur quality". The "Corporate affairs" section appears to have no purpose other than as an excuse to repeat this non-encyclopedic material. The article should focus on what the company has actually done, not its plans and goals - those belong on the company website.
Most of the references are not in English; I hope a neutral editor who speaks German will check these and remove any that are press releases or closely connected sites. I've removed three that were from the company's blog.—Anne Delong (talk) 12:38, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
- I rewrote a sentence to be about what the company did instead of what it planned to do.—Anne Delong (talk) 21:18, 26 April 2016 (UTC)