Submission declined on 17 July 2023 by Drmies (talk).
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- Comment: No secondary sourcing whatsoever to prove the subject passes NPROF; instead, we have a LinkedIn style resume with unverified claims and links to publications. That is not how biographies on Wikipedia are written. Drmies (talk) 00:27, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: User:Drmies: Please read NPROF more carefully, because your decline statement is flat-out incorrect. She clearly and obviously passes WP:PROF#C5 as the holder of a named and distinguished professorship at a major research university; that criterion considers publications by the university (such as the source we have, her faculty directory page) to be sufficient as references. That said, there are multiple other claims in the article (her birthday, her past work history) that are unsupported by the current sources; everything must be properly sourced. And the book publications should be supported by independent published sources (most likely published reviews of the books) rather than their publishers' sales sites; the sources should be formatted as references, not as links within the article text. And the bare-url references should be replaced by properly formatted human-readable references. So this draft was not ready to be accepted, but for different reasons than the ones you gave. —David Eppstein (talk) 06:13, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
Jennifer Siegel (born 28 November 1968) is the Bruce R. Kuniholm Distinguished Professor of History and Policy at the Sanford School of Public Policy at Duke University. She graduated with a BA (cum laude) in 1990 from Yale University, where she also earned her MA (1994) and PhD (1998). Before moving to Duke in 2021, Siegel taught at Ohio State University from 2003-2021. She has also taught at the University of Pennsylvania, Boston University, Bennington College, and Yale University. She specializes in nineteenth and twentieth century European diplomatic and military history, and is the author of books and articles on these and other topics.[1] [2]
Work
editSiegel is the author of Endgame: Britain, Russia, and the Final Struggle for Central Asia [1] (2002), and For Peace and Money: French and British Finance in the Service of Tsars and Commissars [2] (2014). Along with Peter Jackson, she co-edited Intelligence and Statecraft: The Use and Limits of Intelligence in International Society [3] (2005). She has also published book chapters and articles in the fields of intelligence history, financial history, and diplomatic history. Siegel has also reviewed numerous books for the New York Times and the Wall Street Journal[3]
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edit- ^ "Jennifer Siegel | Sanford School of Public Policy".
- ^ "Jennifer Siegel | Origins".
- ^ See, for example: https://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052970204712904578094630265897400; https://www.wsj.com/articles/the-origins-of-putins-land-grab-1507675388; https://www.nytimes.com/2014/11/30/books/review/stalin-by-stephen-kotkin.html?searchResultPosition=1
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